TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架

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" ?; f9 B* P& ?7 D8 E( X(一) 对立观点式
1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
6 ^3 L$ p- R1 Q9 g0 b( K  wThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
9 W% A8 O3 E& J2 `# N- B* lWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
A is superior in another way, this is…
0 K9 j" M+ S1 L9 [It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
9 K2 L8 u& h0 eFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
. R7 _# I$ T# z0 ]For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
/ M, R! {! O2 v/ z5 h6 @: hFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
moreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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(二)单一观点式
' w; L2 f* C( \) S2 w3 I. n1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)

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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
+ ]  ]4 ?: }# Z+ OFinally,…
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…



/ _3 P) J/ _3 L# F0 }1 Z4 v/ l/ F+ Z２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
(本类型只agree)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
5 T9 I$ T! s8 H( m/ rThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
  s- m/ G8 g9 \* V8 v( ~What is also worth noticing fact is that……
8 l4 w0 x) D0 tA is superior in another way, this is…
: X  B( T) Q  ~; Q& B6 LIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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' [- n: J0 o5 E6 _2 i+ w( B& V; P(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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3 E7 G$ u. ^7 ]( ?' NThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
When reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
, O5 o, p5 N3 {9 @/ ~/ ]% IThe main reason for my propensity for C is that……
% |8 Z8 e9 S! J" ?/ l  w0 NWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
C is superior in another way, this is…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
; ^, r1 s* m3 }& p(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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: n# B# t5 ~9 y+ @2 r& }+ t$ L1 ^(四)原因解释型
1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.

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陈述这个事实
$ ^! `8 Z1 D+ v6 AAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
0 e7 R, p! @: V1 b' j8 }. p. eOne of the primary causes is that…
+ Y5 V# y* m2 }, @) e  ~XXX also results from…
  U$ S( F7 R! Z+ \… is responsible for xxx, as well.
4 a# X: r2 z, H; wTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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+ L, x: p. z' J0 \2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
1 w" J: @! h; [$ ^& TThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.


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9 m( f7 U2 Y' n; `! U; f: C( u% mOne of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
( b$ N4 Q7 b- ]( F1 G1 [/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…
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/ g! W$ L' T+ d. ~a more subtle point which we must consider is that…

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! e# O" G5 Y! q6 T8 sIn addition/ furthermore
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% P% a# t8 _% D' K% eIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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) V$ P4 D  g/ ~+ H/ K0 a; g[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]