我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
# L5 m6 _  a$ H0 X是十多年前的作品了——
/ G8 [" i/ C. n( s# uSummer's Coming
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Faster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
4 f6 g. {# _+ b$ Y" J7 s: B; ^, NFrom the colorful nature
, o3 n' O9 z8 r1 [3 `To my life and dream.

9 _6 s: I. b6 FFollowing the summer's step,
Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
7 A% ]! r# c' |0 K& N! Z! u$ }Washing my heart and soul.

Good-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
I can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。
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一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
* c, B& N( w6 z" ]It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.

8 s- z) J( c- N$ i5 `9 `- r8 C4 E[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
& c' y' O- P7 `7 r% v+ S0 k8 x8 kbut what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了