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茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）
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6 x: k' q( v# Q: H9 K　　　　　One day I always remember

. N. W! p7 O& r0 r) G　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was

exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

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little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,

every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid
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* e/ e1 F$ b+ @9 @ was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely

trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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0 C$ }# D6 [/ K. Odeaest daughter.
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8 r& i9 D( q% O9 sAfter so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！