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TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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发表于 2005-1-5 03:05 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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TOEFL 5分 作文框架
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TWE作文模板汇粹
5 F3 q' x6 L' Z: w; V" T(一) 对立观点式
7 h$ B- G! _; [* j! Y1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)   U; c* o) b: m" Y7 X: r8 X* G( w  v

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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
( E  r; I' O5 |9 z' B' w% n7 EThe main reason for my propensity for A is that……
2 _$ X  N: z% d) F! {6 bWhat is also worth noticing fact is that…… % L4 f+ z  k  ~1 a: k  }! I$ w7 g- o/ C% T
A is superior in another way, this is… / S/ X% I( C* y5 v% ?0 Y' z2 ~
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… & U* m5 e% i+ a
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ... 6 B5 }7 U2 H2 g

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast) 9 t7 k$ H& o# F; p, t* N  e% T
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To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B. : k% f/ D. r/ n# d& ?, l* ~- ?4 q
For A, A 的一个优势 ' h5 }) y6 w0 m- u& @* X# x
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance, & B% O" d( y% k9 L
Furthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is... , z# i( p3 ?+ R4 I! u
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
5 ?5 l( Q: W, C1 k! amoreover, B的优点2,for example…
8 h" f+ F1 I* HFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.
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5 [2 j) z. x* w+ Z/ _( {0 O(二)单一观点式
4 z9 D1 G7 U; B; a) L- ?$ t1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型) , s( E6 ]8 w% {- o  p. f
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.   f6 j2 F- h2 g' d
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
  ?5 a( \: M+ E1 V- D# [1 T6 U% E1 ZThere is no denying that…
# D. I* Z* W6 V2 mAnother reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that… 6 a4 V" S/ `3 F$ V6 r' ^) Z
Finally,… 0 f; E  a* Q- w0 ?: Q
Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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2.给出一个论点,主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由.?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C. , ]- @* K6 k5 ~
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
- U- T3 B2 u2 ]9 h7 {What is also worth noticing fact is that…… 3 V8 d+ A0 s: m0 S/ ]9 e) B
A is superior in another way, this is… / y1 F% U0 Z4 u% ^7 _
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because… $ e: K* b# C% `; Y$ G
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...
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(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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5 v* }3 o# O; \) b: RThere exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
4 K3 i. c5 L- @0 m! UWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
) [7 L5 H7 H+ A4 t0 x3 jThe main reason for my propensity for C is that…… 1 a7 l. W1 z, {4 u/ M3 u) h% z
What is also worth noticing fact is that……
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2 t, W; t) ^& d: T: Z# s2 |/ @" h8 ^8 vFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C ( O) d. S, ^" P2 Q" g' |( j& _
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
( _7 m. `! L! A% n( p; G# Y(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.) 9 k4 b9 v5 G3 n

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1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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6 d- N' Z5 x/ c4 y0 uAmong countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
, |9 f& _9 H0 n8 t" f0 fOne of the primary causes is that… / P9 v$ j- a% |) b3 w. l
XXX also results from…
/ F. b7 _, M' e1 D$ l… is responsible for xxx, as well. ) F: H  F# Y+ F7 u& A
To put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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, y1 [* q5 W4 ?& B) z& ZThere are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that… - [4 b) x; g# x, u% q7 p
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that… 8 \. W8 N! E& W$ u4 v0 S
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that… + M6 O# n* u: Y9 W6 z7 O

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a more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……
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发表于 2005-1-6 12:10 | 显示全部楼层
嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?5 [, I1 t) h2 E3 Q# p

+ E9 Y( ~! B2 D. D. D4 z7 ]再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.
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