我也发个自己的POEM：在美国发表了

Justing

http://poetry.com/Publications/d ... amp;BN=999&PN=1
是十多年前的作品了——
) C3 x3 L* r7 u* D# E4 LSummer's Coming
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0 z  M) U- m) D4 S! bFaster, hotter and sweater,
Summer's coming, coming, -ing ---
7 A, S3 M' J8 [6 Z! I6 ]From the colorful nature
* L/ O: X% i4 A, m; U1 ~To my life and dream.

! l( A# o  y; b$ M9 ]Following the summer's step,
. C2 q! W8 g8 ]4 o: ]Let myself go ---
Go to the wild rain
) D) j) a% D# l# VWashing my heart and soul.

2 L9 Q( J) n2 R# jGood-bye, my happy spring;
Good-bye, my childish dream.
* u1 O. [& G1 \; x$ NI can prepare nothing;
My life is coming to a new season.

文宇

看不懂555~~

海妮妮

有点Nickelback的味道，可以谱成歌，很上口。

三思

我中文都写不出来这么好尼。

8 v5 h4 ]1 Y$ J6 r) o. d一转眼，我的盛夏已过，渐渐步入初秋了，每个季节都每个季节的好吧

叽里咕噜

有点depression的感觉, 本来夏天到了, 应该高兴啊

markqiu

人家是在向青春的幼稚告别呢。。。

简约

我想看,能再卖吗?

Justing

我误会了，以为卖完了大家就可以免费看了，我修改去

Justing

手头有一个证书，可惜上传不了，编辑的评语是：
It displays a unique perspective and original creativity -- judged to be the qualities most found in exceptional poetry.
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[ Last edited by zh921972 on 2005-11-16 at 09:54 PM ]

简约

thank you, i can see it now.
but what is the title?

Justing

Summer's Coming
夏天来了