作文竞赛第一贴！！

茉莉花开

抛砖之作！（我英语测试时的作文之一）

% G* B; c! ~% t# L# m　　　　　One day I always remember

5 W  F9 @4 B7 U, P2 P$ y) I　　July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was
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exactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to

  e% a/ a; K+ M$ `& _) T3 t7 bput up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my

# o( V3 k+ F: L6 v little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,
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$ X$ ?* m! o- [" |+ q every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid

was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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trusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since

& i1 x' e# K* M0 @* g- g. p, ithat date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing

/ i' t$ e1 g* h2 O on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard

9 V$ x! R: L3 f; S7 d5 Ifor me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my

deaest daughter.
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will
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never forget the birthday of their children, never! I believe.
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1 \* o/ F, }; D% \5 n3 o[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]

mercurybird

good better best!!!!!!
! o/ _. c, V  ], O' J  V. Mwe should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!

OliveOil

It is great!

connie

GREAT！