TOEFL 5分 作文框架(转帖)

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TOEFL 5分 作文框架


TWE作文模板汇粹
. u5 a$ L3 C# w) \$ r( i- p(一) 对立观点式
$ v# q* ~$ I: m1.一个事物对立的两个放面/两对立事物,要求考生支持一方并进行说明. (which类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in Something.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I would like to vote for A for three reasons.
; u$ S; I5 G- N3 F2 ^The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
) y- k- i: S" L( A9 TWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
7 G" @; V  c. v8 C' P3 hA is superior in another way, this is…
. R0 q6 I) X0 f3 T) @# OIt is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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2.给出两种观点,要求考生比较他们的优缺点. (compare & contrast)



3 H: L9 o0 R' `: \To choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of A, and neglect the genuinely good aspects of B.
For A, A 的一个优势
Whoever, this "advantage" betrays a hidden drawback of A. A如何如何. For instance,
( b; P4 H1 c# `4 MFurthermore, A的一个大缺点. …A good case in point is...
on the contrary, B的优点1,A particular example for this is…
' }: z0 x6 B, G) i; qmoreover, B的优点2,for example…
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that B fits me better in two ways : B的优点1. B的优点2.

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5 e7 S) |& ^0 x(二)单一观点式
$ v  Y- c  v" E1.给出一结论,此论点不包括两种事物的比较,要求考生支持或反对并给出理由. (同意 或 不同意类型)
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首先 题目观点的重述paraphrase.
After pondering this opinion from several aspects, I totally agree (disgree) with it . The reasons are presented below.
There is no denying that…
9 ^8 k+ X* N6 c6 L& L5 ~Another reason why I agree(disagree) with XXX is that…
Finally,…
# M% E; N( p- M- ^7 J5 n5 _Based on the above discussion, I agree( disagree ) with the opinion that…
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２．给出一个论点，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由．?( Which类型+ 同意 或 不同意类型)
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(Who ……/how plays the most important role in C.) is a prevalent topic undergoing serious debate. There exist two obvious and definite opinions regarding this controversy: A and B. personally, I agree with the above statement that A is superior than B in Doing C.
The main reason for my propensity for A is that……
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A is superior in another way, this is…
It is undeniable that B has its own merits .Whoever, B can only be achieved conditionally because…
, ?- j- q( ]& R; GFrom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that ...

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3 Z, y% V$ z7 s6 ~; g, }(三)选择多观点之一 并 解释你为什么选择他它_型
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There exist various choices in doing XXX such as A,B,C,D.
* J4 }# Y( t' X' W. g" a5 IWhen reflecting personal or aesthetic preferences, our choices are based upon our opinions. I prefer C most in my view for three reasons.
The main reason for my propensity for C is that……
9 C+ ]  N8 e- xWhat is also worth noticing fact is that……
! r0 ]' u% {  c$ `1 fC is superior in another way, this is…
5 U$ q- n5 \% T: aFrom what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that C
From what has been discussed above, I may safely draw the conclusion that choosing C is sensible for me/us.
" P8 ]6 ?4 V  Z8 A(In summary, I prefer C according to my personality and fondness.)

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(四)原因解释型
* m' h9 }# M+ s4 D) G$ z% D( g1. 给出一个事实,要求解释它的原因.
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陈述这个事实
Among countless factors which contribute to XXX, there are three conspicuous aspects follows.
One of the primary causes is that…
" ]$ p8 }- Q! C( N; H& d5 tXXX also results from…
… is responsible for xxx, as well.
. P' L8 d: S7 C6 }1 z! m5 yTo put all into a nutshell, I draw the conclusion that A,B and C are three main contributors to XXX
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+ e; @9 O( b; J8 t2. What should we do? How do something influence our lives? what are the characters of something.
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背景描述
There are numerous approaches to solving…/impacts on sth. /characteristics of… , and I would explore the most conspicuous ones there.
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One of the primary method, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary impact, to my mind, is that…
/one of the primary characteristic, to my mind, is that…


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/ J- B; g/ ^2 Q7 @2 u9 Ia more subtle point which we must consider is that…
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In addition/ furthermore
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& B1 H, P; ]; `. O. E' ^7 }$ GIn conclusion, Taking into account of all these methods/ affects / aspects, we may reach the conclusion that……

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嗯! 是不错, 你咋不转6分的作文框架呢?
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. a) S9 Q2 S/ U0 H, P再想想, 这个框架人人都用, 你说判卷人满眼望去大家几乎都是雷同的句子, 他能给5分吗? 总要有点出奇制胜的地方. 当然也不能全靠6分的框架.

, H) l9 Z( V0 c9 l9 F' F/ m: Q2 I! m[ Last edited by 子菲鱼 on 2005-1-6 at 01:59 PM ]