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儿子写给老妈的'控诉'信

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发表于 2006-1-13 10:13 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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) A, p) x( C: \; ?1 [; k: a$ Z: Z儿子13,正在学习写作. 恰逢范文是一封信,他挥笔就来,成就了下面的'控诉'状.$ Z( |; C: l4 o3 o
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好心的读者帮帮忙:+ A& M  G+ D8 L" ?7 b, {
1)多少是他妈该改变的?7 i; P; \% z; y9 ]8 X+ K( A
2)多少是TEENAGER该收敛的?
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* M# w7 r0 P  D6 }, v9 Q! lHi, Mum, aka. Isabel 3 m) t- W# @6 F1 ~& Z/ F$ D
I have written you this message because:
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I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.& C9 ]- P0 ^& ~/ `
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.0 m4 h8 v: ]- v1 y( a- z/ J) t
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.
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# ], Y9 ?5 [8 qI would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.  w- B% C5 b: m7 o# g
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I wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any." ]- |6 A, W( b, A1 ?

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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.
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Your sincerely:( I didn't like writing this)
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发表于 2006-1-13 19:18 | 显示全部楼层
I reckon that I should not need to remember as much  Chinese words because my brain gets frustrated. And you make me work too hard.不同意,小孩子的大脑容量是巨大的。
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I should also get more presents at Christmas and get rewards for getting more than 90% in any exam.不作评论。: S7 Q4 ^- S2 w& k, x: z+ t
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You should let me watch TV, play PS2, and stay up late more.同意。+ l$ q5 @) f; l7 N, T: r

+ H4 u& y. \, I" ]+ ]I would also like to re-arrange my room a little bit by replacing everything with flowers on it.同意。
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7 F2 C/ [( U6 ]8 Z7 SI wouldn't mind more PS2 games and DVDs but you wouldn't let me get any.每天1~2小时。
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' O8 Y: G8 J  r( }3 n6 AYou should also buy me some poker chips so I can play poker at home. 同意。
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I would also like a TV in my room, so my room looks cool, and maybe some more posters.不同意。
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The last thing is that I should do less chores.应该多做家务事。
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4 i, b' y1 F: I: s1 H8 WYour sincerely:( I didn't like writing this) 括号里面的话不好。
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