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发表于 2004-11-28 00:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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抛砖之作!(我英语测试时的作文之一)
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     One day I always remember
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" i4 K/ B- o( y  U  July **, 1996,  a beautiful and shining day I always remember. It was/ t) G. G) l* p; _$ K

( I* {" P' k% eexactly the date when my dearest daughter was born. Although I had to
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put up with the pain and suffering at that time, I was still eager to see my' D2 Y, Z& u7 Z0 t- f1 a4 P

# t5 m* P3 y  X little baby. In the last ten months, she was part of my body. Every pulse,, c; J7 x4 b8 u# j$ }  {

2 b! W" g6 `' M- o3 O every quickening made me a sweet feeling because I had known a little kid+ m% A. g- W8 z0 |6 Q; Y
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was comletely depending on me and being close with me. Absolutely
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) M6 V5 m' u, v; c6 E" z6 x$ ktrusted by a little infant, I was so proud of being one great mother. Since " J. x6 Q. |4 X% y

  s' a9 \, E" w; R# |that date, I realized I would be not only a wife but also a mother. Focusing9 K1 L8 ^1 z& v+ K
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on a new life and taking all responsiblity while her growing up, will be hard 3 F$ f" i3 F0 [$ V+ ]' H
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for me. Without any hesitation yet, I was willing to devote all my life to my
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, ^3 p2 p" U# E$ [: [3 ]deaest daughter.+ d! o9 i) B1 f
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After so many years, I still remember that wonderful day. Every mother, will, {3 p  j. V1 y1 |9 ~

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[ Last edited by 茉莉花开 on 2004-11-28 at 03:20 AM ]
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发表于 2004-11-28 01:11 | 显示全部楼层
good better best!!!!!!
$ y) p" z1 r# ~0 P* [we should pay the immense tributions to you and all mothers over the world!
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发表于 2004-11-28 12:04 | 显示全部楼层
It is great!
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发表于 2004-11-29 04:25 | 显示全部楼层
老杨团队 追求完美
GREAT!
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